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Chill

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it is very cold
fingers frozen; heartstrings too
i should go to bed
Alternate version:
it is very cold
fingers frozen, elbows too
i should go to bed

I thought that with "heartstrings" instead of "elbows" it was more poetic. Cos otherwise it's a status report. :iconimderpyplz:
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